Writing about the Dog and Friends

Hi today.I have share with you my writing.

One day there was a dog, the dog had one friend and she wanted to have some more friends but she couldn't because no friend wanted to be her friend because they thought she was gross and they hurt her feelings. She was so sad when she got home and she cried. Then  the girl  came and asked me what happened. “Why are you crying?'' she said then I said “because I Don't have any friends but you can be my friend! And thank you for being my friend.